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Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-24 4:45]

Hi Akihisa,

A really lovely scene of the Lighthouse the grass is a nice golden colour and I love the parallel lines leading up to the road.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-24 4:39]

Hi Hans,

I think he followed your every move cos he thought you were edible not cos you have a nikon ha ha. A really impecable shot of this beautiful falcon the eyes are very intense love the plumage tfs.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-22 5:07]

Hi Derek,

I don't know about hardy foolhardy maybe but that aside what a view to wake up to. A great shot from the bridge looking over the loch I love the stillness of the water. On the minus side there is a a little glare on the left. See you when you get home.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-22 4:58]

Hi Cerys,

Although a shot from further back would have included more of the pillar to the right this is a very good shot with nice clarity. It is a very good example of architecture nicely presented the colours are very good but would have been better if the file size had been much larger 90kb is small.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-22 4:47]

Hi Bri,

A great capture and a nice low pov the curve of the bay leads the eye nicely in to shot, I love the colours that the sinking sun has thrown up well done.


Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-17 9:18] [+]

Hi Alana,

I think that the shot is out of focus and there is some motion blur which spoils this completely for me, it is only my opinion though.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-17 9:13] [+]

Hi Bryan,

This a very lovely shot I love autumnal colours so rich but you have part of the shot out of focus ie: the main house. The reflections are great the sky could be better but the scene is worth a smiley.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-09 4:35]

Hi Bryan,

I am very worried about your sanity playing wi dolls at your age you should be ashamed lol.
I am not sure what you wanted to achieve by shooting this as it appears to as more of a snapshot than anything else imho. As a pure experiment it works so is worth a smilley.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-09 0:10]

Hi Bryan,

This is a very good pov of the kirk but I would like to see this shot without the topaz treatment as I personally think it spoils what could be a great shot.

Regards
Jon

Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2759) [2009-11-09 0:02]

Hi Bri,

Great sentiments and good shot for the subject, war would stop if the politicians did the fighting and the soldiers all stayed at home.

Regards
Jon