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T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-11-02 21:46]

This is great. The colours are good, and the panda is posing very nicely for you. It's a lot better than the other panda photo you posted earlier.

Chine
Title: Singer
Singer (÷)
thy Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 4 N: 1] (178)

Needs Improvement

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-27 11:35] [+]

What was she demonstrating, I wonder? I also wonder if the singer would choose to display this image if she had a choice. In a way, I think it's difficult to come up with an image that shows someone in a really good way, but it's pretty easy to produce one that makes them look bad.

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-25 20:45]

This is great! Very well done. I can imagine that it took a lot of attempts. I found a very photogenic drip catching a shaft of sunlight. You can see them here:

http://www.treklens.com/viewphotos.php?l=5&p=544498

http://www.treklens.com/viewphotos.php?l=5&p=544755

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-25 7:49]

This is great. I really like the abstract feel to this. It reminds me of HK. Well done.

Chine
Title: A
A (22)
ognita (60)

Great

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-20 18:58]

This is great--the water and the sky came out very well with the long exposure. Looking forward to seeing more.

Chine
Title: Worship
Worship (÷)
thy Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 4 N: 1] (178)

 

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-14 20:48]

I find this a bit disturbing, because of the slightly tilted horizon and because of the lack of space on the left (where the woman is facing) and all of the empty space on the right.

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-06 19:54] [+]

This is great. I saw one similar in Sichuan, and it has a red cloth tied around the topmost crossbeam--just like in the Zhang Yimou film, The Road Home.
Well done.

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-10-02 6:57] [+]

This is great. A flash might have left the shadows a bit harsher, but that's OK.

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-09-29 12:02] [+]

This is great--looks just like Sichuan shaokao. It's nice that the flower pedlar is in the frame, too. I'm wondering what it would look like from a higher point of view--I think you could get in more of the food and less of the wall at the back, which would be OK.
Nice work.

T_Janzen Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750) [2009-09-19 7:04] [+]

This is great--but I'm disturbed by your comment about the couple being unphotogenic. I think it's up to the photographer to make his or her subjects photogenic. If a viewer looks at a photo and says, "They're not photogenic", that says a lot more about the photographer than the subjects. There is certainly nothing in this photograph to suggest that the couple are unphotogenic--you did a great job here.