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philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2011-04-05 11:14]

Nice solid work, I love the incorporation of the old helmet into modern fashion. The shadow cast on the model's eyes gives the image a mysterious quality. Great work.

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2011-03-30 22:40] [+]

Great image, I like everything from the girl's posture her clothing style. The picture tells a story. It's unfortunate that it was so sunny out and the subject is pretty underexposed, while the background is overexposed. I've posted a workshop to show one way to help fix a little bit of this.

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-09-18 20:11]

Beautiful shot...looks like a postcard. TFS!

Phil

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-08-19 13:58]

Hi Kevin,

It's a beautiful image but the first thing I see is the funky white balance. Your daughter's skin appears yellow/greenish. I've posted a workshop on one way to fix the skin tones.

I realize that this wasn't a portrait session but if it were I would suggest bringing in your fill light in at a 45 degree angle as opposed to straight because it gives your subject more depth. TFS!

Phil

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guava Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 58 W: 16 N: 18] (794)

Good

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-08-19 13:38] [+]

Hi Lena,

This is a decent image but it's very underexposed. You can use the dodge tool in PS to lighten some of the darker areas. It's always best to try and get your exposure correct rather than try and fix it later. TFS.

Phil

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-07-07 12:03]

Great shot! Awesome detail in the sky. HDR I presume?

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-05-03 19:40]

Trampas,

If you stopped being a dick, people wouldn't call you such. Easy solution...You seem get off on attacking beginning photographers on Treklens (which is obviously a website for beginners)

Phil

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-04-20 0:48]

Great PP work, very creative! It definitely captures the imagination. Well done!

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-04-10 17:26]

Jens, wow, what an amazing shot! Awesome idea! Did you have a pocketwizard to set off your speed light? I suppose with a shutter speed of 1/2 second you wouldn't need the pocketwizard and could fire it by hand. TFS!

philip Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 222 W: 31 N: 186] (1350) [2009-04-10 15:23]

Hi Eden!

Great PP work, I like the overall feel of it. Did you use an action for the hue/texture in the sky? TFS!

Phil