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trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-04-19 4:18]

Quite puzzling why you would choose f/22 and let 1/20s risk handmotion blur? which luckily did not happen and this is not bad result for a 1st try although you could get more variants by changing angles and positions to shoot this same flower. No particular strong subject point of interest but rich colors.

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-04-19 4:15]

A nice post for your entry to TL. Perhaps I see a little tilt of the building to the right? I would try to use f/14 and put focus on the building. Maybe reduce the space of the water at foreground and draw more attention to the castle. Interesting to find a castle in Perak, which I never knew about.

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-02-16 4:55]

hi Oana

Stunning POV. Excellent postcard quality.

I do not believe I could miss this one because as a postcard I would surely buy it for the summer colors and attractive architecture of this town square, showing this as a tourist attraction is naturally very good selling point with such a well composed and brightly lighted and colored scenic view.

Excellent note and description for such a tourism purpose and for someone who knows very little, this is a great piece of introduction.

Technically there is nothing to say with f/8 and 1/320s setting to give this perfect result. Bravo!

bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-19 4:29]

hi Mariana

Monkeys in Romania? Aha, not and they are from Morocco :)) very interesting because they look like humans. A nice collage. If you have long zoom, it would be so nice to see the details in close up.

Greetings from Borneo
tfs, bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-19 4:24] [+]

buna vlad

I have seen your summer version and the winter version is a nice view but not a good place to be there, it is too cold :)

I agree, the color tones are very attractive and reverse of the summer mood.

Greetings from Borneo.
tfs, bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-19 4:23]

buna Iulia

BBQ on 2010-1-17? That is winter snow and cold! but here is only darkness and flame :)

multumesc
Greetings from Borneo, the world's 3rd largest island.
Tropical evergreen
bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-19 4:09]

David :))

So this is it! After 1 year, you transformed yourself into a father and this is real cute. I see Panda eyes here and you will run out of memory cards!

Nice!

bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-18 18:54]

hi Jose

It is a perfect composition, very tight crop, no distortion and the light is great, with busy square full of people and vibrance at this moment. I would like to frame the 2 people at bottom left but sometimes I know they would stand there for a long time and you cannot miss the light or moment for too long :))

Nice work!
tfs, bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-18 18:52]

hi Teresa

I have come to recognize that this is your style, giving abstract of the train and yet showing a part of the city, rail track and buildings which really make your thought of searching for a composition very interesting, it is more to an art of shapes and forms that you are showing, an extract of city life which you see and yet you wish to block out other part of the city you dont wish me to see :))

I like it.
tfs, bill

trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665) [2010-01-18 12:27]

Hi

It looks like artwork created by nature and the red is surrounded by pure white to really make it stand out so strongly, especially from the way you composed this shot with shallow DOF.

I also cannot help but imagine that there is a white frog hanging upside down just below the red, as if trying to jump into water below.

I like it.

Greetings from Borneo.
tfs, bill