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Morning Commute


Morning Commute
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Copyright: Rew Shearer (rewshearer) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5496 W: 444 N: 4351] (24649)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2008-07-01
Catégories: Vie quotidienne
Appareil photographique: Canon EOS 400D/Rebel XTi, Canon EF 75-300mm 1:4-5.6 III, @ ISO 400
Exposition: f/5.0, 1/1000 secondes
More Photo Info: [view]
Map: [view]
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Carnet de voyage: Philippines
Thème(s): Philippines [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2008-08-26 17:59
Vue: 3029
Points: 71
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
Not far from CCP, the day is getting started.

This is 7:30am and the traffic is getting heavy, school is getting underway. The jeepneys, the vendors, the commuters are on the move.

Snapshot taken along F. B. Harrison Road, from the corner of Gil Puyat.

PP - the schoolkids were in deep shadow, I used layers and shadow/highlight to bring them out.

Kilted-Arab, tiobibi, kross1, roald, manujmehta, Regiomontana, MLINES, Teresat, M_A_C_R_O, dareco, jusninasirun, szatanowska, perryhooter, jovienaval trouve(nt) cette note utile
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Discussions
Enchaînement de réflexionsInitiateur de la discussion Messages Modifié
A jayanathcg: PP work ...rewshearer 1 08-05 13:09
A galderjon: Goal ...rewshearer 1 12-26 01:25
A aniruddharay: WS ...rewshearer 3 03-07 20:44
A szatanowska: Hotrewshearer 2 08-30 08:19
A jusninasirun: Daily life ...rewshearer 1 08-28 01:00
A Regiomontana: Too kind ...rewshearer 1 08-27 02:00
A WENEINEA: Poor English??rewshearer 1 08-27 01:55
A roald: Hiccups ...rewshearer 1 08-27 01:15
A kross1: Thank yourewshearer 1 08-27 01:08
A TigerlilyBorneo: Jeepneyrewshearer 1 08-27 01:07
A Kilted-Arab: Bugger!rewshearer 1 08-26 19:37
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Critiques [Translate]

I hate to use the word "bokeh" as I think it sounds pretentious, but you've nailed that aspect in this shot. The main group of people is in good focus and attention isn;t drawn immediately to the background. However, there is enough detail there for it to add a great deal of interest and context. Not sure I've explained that well, but hope you get what I mean.

There is a reall sense of a hot, dusty and bustling Manila street in this shot - you have caught the feel of the place very nicely.

A bit of dodgy pp work around the boys legs, it seems? But that aside everything else works well. Nice street shot, Rew.

Hi Rew

You brought the subjects out well, especially with the bokeh BG. This is how I remember Manila, already busy at this hour. Good that you caught the jeepney (correct me if I'm wrong) in the background! Its a part of Manila.

Thanks for sharing.
Cheerios
Esther

HI Rew..great shot showing daily life..nicely composed...nice tones and details.

Roger

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  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 0 N: 82] (1091)
  • [2008-08-26 20:03]

Hi Shearer,

Good shot of daily life. It's happened everywhere
in this worlds. Now we can see the schoolkids wearing difference uniform from others.I like the way highlight the subject. Good compositions.

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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  • roald Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 57 N: 65] (773)
  • [2008-08-26 20:12]
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hi rew.

this kind of shot i envy, very natural. lucky you, none of them smile or worst gave you the PEACE sign. a vey good capture of daily life with the right mood.

agree with kilted-arab on the legs + the bracket on the upper right hand could have been crop or clone-erase perhaps, minor hiccups but IMO this is very good.

roald

Deep picture i think, at least in two ways : the group of young school people looking forward with hope of a bus and a better future is in contrast with dull town -and its nice you drove them out of the deep shadow they were hidden in - and, obviously, they are surrounded with portraits of the destiny the town promises to them : elder woman and men, already at work, with their (night, children)dreams forgotten in the early day activities. All of it on the diagonal of the road our eyes follow. Thanks for revealing it through your talentuous snapshot (and sorry for such a poor english).
Wene

Nicely done here Rew, well composed scene. Lighting is good and I like the compression of perspective here.
Good photo.
David

What can I tell to such a great photographer like you? I go to your gallery very often and enjoy looking at many of your photos. You are very good in capturing feelings. It is good you added light to the shadow part with the kids, and still we can see the contrast with the light on the the middle and back part of this cultural scene. TFS

Lorena

Ang Galing ng compo mo d2, naalala ko 2loy ung highschool life ko.

Great Shot!
Cris

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1350 W: 102 N: 1081] (9125)
  • [2008-08-26 23:57]

Hi Rew, This is a fine composition showing everyday life on the streetscape of Manila. The group waiting and the bus beyond provides superb balance. Well presented. TFS. Murray.

Good morning Rew

Superb shot here, lots of colour, early morning hustle and bustle with excellent DOF on the main subject. Your PP work with the lighting really makes them stand out and gives a well balanced feel to the shot. Lovely posting.

TFS regards Helen

hello rew
how are you?
a very intersting street shot of the city, i have all the morning kios available here. i wonder how brilliantly these people in the foregraound stand out of the shot. very nively defocused bg but an interesting one. the provided space to the truck/bus has defined well. alltogether this is an intersting composition.
thanks for sharing

regards
Manuj Mehta
:)soon

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 1] (12005)
  • [2008-08-27 0:56]

Hi Rew
beaitufil candid picture..Good composition.
Gr Jos

Beuaitfull urban image Rew,
great focus, very nice composition...
TFS

Regards!

Igor

I like this DOF, it's very 'tasty' and your composition is perfect;
TFS, best regards - Tomasz

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2008-08-27 2:39]

nice capture
good focus over the subject
well done

Hi Rew,
Nice reportage photo indeed. It tells a story. I like the three dimensional effect of your PP work. It also has a great atmosphere due to the contrast of moving and still elements. Very nice to see some people passing by, some looking for the bus, the girl doing a phonecall?! - and the boy in the middle - as the one and only - who just descovers beeing photographed by you. Perfect sharpness and POV. Great work.
TFS
Thomas

Bom dia Rew
Your capture is amazinh. Very well framed and superb definition. Very "rich" composition. Thanks
My regards
teresat

Great as always!

wow nice shot well composed. You got the feel of busy street in Manila.

cris(",)

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1672 W: 16 N: 832] (15528)
  • [2008-08-27 10:47]

Wow this really takes me back there, a great capture. I agree with Kilted, the background is great, still interesting but the focus on the group of people is perfect. I love those school uniforms! Very nice lighting. TFS and have a happy day!

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 98 N: 3374] (17650)
  • [2008-08-27 14:23]

Wonderful shot Rew, very interesting to look at,you have captured the hustle and bustle very well, and also the people in the shot, one wonders just what they are all thinking. Well done!

Cheers
Dawn

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  • Jeruel Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 111 W: 25 N: 38] (1383)
  • [2008-08-27 21:44]

Very nice image, Rew. Well composed and effective in your presentations.

Jeruel

i think the image here is self-explanatory of a busy morning as you briefly put in your note, Rew.

none of the subject here is an alien to the mood.
i like the placement of the core subject - the schoolkids (look like they are siblings).

again, you perfectly summed it up in your note in a lovely style!

TFS
regards
Agoes

Hello Rew. Excellent daily life featuring the kids of Philippines doing their morning routine. The placement in the frame and the focus are very good. A slightly blurry but visible backdrop adds impact to the image. You did well with the PP to bring out the light on the subject under the shade. Top drawer image and well done. Jusni

Hi Rew,
I like the focus on the group of people. The soft blurred BG really allows for the subject to stand out. I like how the BG shows activity but does not take my interest from the people. A nice street scene.
Regards,
Kevin

Later

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 788 W: 52 N: 418] (10434)
  • [2008-08-28 10:11]

daily life in Manila . . . ang galing Rew! ;) Tfs

OgGie

hi Rew!!

its looks like its very hot there since morning!!
well done, good POV..
great report of everyday Manila's live!
TFS

ciao
Ania

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2008-09-01 10:26]

Hello Rew, very nice daily life shot, good dof and very good technique, thanks!

Mario

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1995 W: 141 N: 3390] (13665)
  • [2008-09-01 19:28]

hi Rew

I really like this daily life scene and you have captured the morning rush very well here for a bustling scene. All the wires and obstructions in blur as the backdrop giving a nice indication of how 'Asian' as it can be.

On your latest series of candid and street shots, it begins to pull you away from what we have known you as portrait and studio style. I like the new addition, Rew but that is just my personal opinion. tfs

bill

Hi Rew! Very nice compo and a successful post-processing! The fancy car and the cyclist at the bg adds to this classic daily life scene.
TFS
Sotiris

Hello Rew!

Lovely street scene . Text book comosition. I see it very in a magazine. Great eye contactbetween the trio of students and you. Smart Post processing and use of shadow/highlight to reveal the details .
Cheers!
Robert

I am catching up after a long but needed break

wow welcome to the real world for everyday traffic life, hehehehe!
tfs.
like the dof very much ;-)

This is a nice photo of people. I would like to share a workshop of this photo. Hope u don't mind.

Interesting catch, i donnow if i should pay more attention to the unfocused vehicle or to the group of students... Is that a good thing? Was it your goal? Did u notice this could happen? Is it important at all?

As i consider myself a rookie comparing to you, i am so open minded to your answers.

Also, do you consider important the darker line in the edge of the student leg? I think it is unnatural and should be fixed.

Galder

hi Rew

I like the shot..but when you go through the outlines(edges) of uniforms you can see a dark line. That's a sign of PP work...so when somebody sees this he knows that you have done some PP work. Be careful with edges. Did you use a softening filter?

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