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Diagonal duopartition world


Diagonal duopartition world
Information sur la photo
Copyright: Carmela Zmiric (Carma) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
Genre: Gens
Média: Noir & blanc
Date de prise de vue: 2005-08-18
Catégories: Expérimental, Ambiance, Portrait
Appareil photographique: Canon Powershot Pro 1
Details: Tripod: Yes
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Thème(s): Intimate Self Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2005-08-23 16:13
Vue: 751
Points: 40
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
If we could make partitions only with the move of the hand.
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A logisticfm: Hi RynoCarma 1 03-18 13:34
A edie: Hi EdieCarma 1 08-29 06:47
A jpdeloof: p'tit essaijpdeloof 1 08-25 09:36
A ruudblok: hiCarma 5 08-24 09:33
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Critiques [Translate]

Hi Carmela!
once again a beautiful self portrait in black and white... great capture... as you see I cannot be silent :)) Well done! Always a pleasure.
Fred

very nice, I like the blends, the lighting, and the b&w....

GT

Good pose. Sexy radiation. Good use of the area. Old complain make your skin a little softer.
This is very close to a real high-key and there comes the complain from. Allow me to send a WS and give it a try.

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  • GlenC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 2 N: 99] (787)
  • [2005-08-23 16:59]

That's a very interesting pose Carmela. Haven't seen many like it, if at all. Love the black and white and the blur effect. TFS,

Glen

Superb Carmela. Very well done. Very unusual but truly effective pose. The processing does the composition justice. Congratulations!

Danny

Hi Carma, hummm interesting series, you're very good behing and in front of the camera too... very moody, very intimate.

Wonderfull photo.

Mario

Marvellous contemporary portrait Carmela, great use of black and white. Terrific composition, love the diagonal pose. TFS

Peter

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  • Yogi Gold Star Critiquer [C: 92 W: 7 N: 33] (237)
  • [2005-08-24 2:16]

Hi again, Carmela :)

Photo is awesome!

This is very good photo and great PP work!
In portraits and self-portraits I also prefer simplicity and using just few colours and tones!

Pozdrav,
Marin

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-24 3:31]

Dancing in the White …
Beautiful composition, Carmela !!!
Antonio

Hi dear !
Speedy is just discovering this beauty !
Absolutely amazing self-portrait !
The division made by your arm between the blur part of you and the sharp one is great ...
As if your arm was doing the movement of making all things clear, creating a metamorphosis of yourself, being about to give a new face of yourself ...
It is a great work, beyond simple photography !
Congrats.
Sylvie

very interesting as technique and compo......
well done Carmela, as usual.....
and in your case to write "as usual" is a realy positive thing
Paolo

superbe portrait!
exellent B&W!!
bravo CARMELA!
bye....tanbinh.

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  • M4tej Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 224 W: 28 N: 90] (779)
  • [2005-08-24 7:27]

Nice!!

hello Carma. It is very beautiful I notice more and more that you have a great talent jp

I'd like to see more of this serie!!!
Carmela, this is NICE!!
cheers
ToM

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 128 N: 510] (6612)
  • [2005-08-24 14:45]

Hello Carmela,

When I get a critique I normally also ghave a quick look at the work. This is a very artistic one.
Special because of the composition and it fits well in B&W. The diagonal directs to the mouth.
Maybe a bit darker would give even more effect.

Thanks,

Hendrik

Very well drawn, just a lesson of balance of elements and mouvement from the body.
I am in admiration.
Nice model of course, but I suppose you are the model.
Compliments
jean Michel

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  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-29 6:07]
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Very good pose,a lot of sensations here...sensuality,mystery,maybe pain,the diagonal is like a methafore for yourself? A part well focused and a blurred one....
Moody picture,I love it.
Edie

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2005-11-02 9:36]

This is an image of great erotic beauty. The sensuality shines through. This can be done only in B/W. Very good work, carmela.

I love this photo. It's the type I love to take as well!!!
They are gonna say its overexposed in some places!
You dont care, this is the look that you wanted.

They are gonna say, maybee a bit more face.
You dont care, this is the look that you wanted. Etc. Etc. Etc.

I love the pose. I love the look. I love the crispness of her lips and lower hair. I love it all.

Great shot, lovely model, nice ideas!!!
Keep it up

logisticfm

very strong of art.
u r a real Artis specially for B&W.
regards
Haldian

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