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• marcocig (3542)
• [2007-08-13 6:33]
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Hi Iulian,
I find your layered compo a bit overdone, anyway I find that the two figures looing at the moon work well with the face close up, but the air conditioner on the top left corner is really "disturbing".
I would try to clone out the BG to have a better result.

Marco

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• asiivalceni (0)
• [2007-08-13 10:46]

Sal Iulian...
In poza asta..m-ai prins cand..dupa o masa buna..., imi doream sa dorm un pic...:-)
Eram tare obosita si...cascam!:-P
ce sa ai zic?
NO COMMENT!
Numai bine,
Ella

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• Rissiepit (702)
• [2007-08-13 11:30]

Hi Iulian
This is an interesting idea but I have to say that the aircon and the shutter stuff is ruining the effect a bit.
Maybe if you could make the background around the girl one color, like blue or sky, that would concentrate it better.
Also, the other ground with the two figures on the riverbank could have been a bit lower, so that the black line does not come through the picture but is at the bottom.
Neat idea though!

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• oanna (939)
• [2007-08-14 3:16]

buna,iuli,eu nu vad de ce ar deranja fundalul dar in fine,unii ar fi preferat probabil sa fie o imagine de studio foto.foarte frumos combinate cele doua imagini.o prelucrare superba,

felicitari:)

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• anducina (8259)
• [2007-08-19 7:49]

Interesanta si originala compozitie, imi place ideea. Tonurile acestea violete sunt excelente, ca si suprapunerea celor doua layere. Ar trebui sa faci si o poza doar cu Ella, fara al doilea layer, cred ca ar fi un portret foarte reusit.

TFS,

Andreea