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Taking a rest ... in autumn!


Taking a rest ... in autumn!
Information sur la photo
Copyright: Beverley Robinson (Royaldevon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1649 W: 373 N: 4202] (16382)
Genre: Lieux
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2009-10-31
Catégories: Nature
Appareil photographique: Nikon D200, Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX
Exposition: f/4.2, 1/1500 secondes
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale, Workshop
Thème(s): Friday's Theme 11.06.09: Autumn/Spring [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2009-11-06 1:28
Vue: 202
Favoris: 1 [voir]
Points: 74
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
Hello Everyone,

This is a sycamore leaf that I saw taking a rest on a bench in Hyde Park, London. Behind, you will just get a glimpse of all the other leaves ... on the ground. It had been raining which probably accounts for it being stuck to the wood.

I loved the diagonal lines of the bench and its contrasting hue, with the leaf.

I know the leaf is quite centrally placed but, to me, it looked far better in that position. Let's call this artistic licence.

Shot in RAW, converted in PSE6.
Very little pp, just sharpened, cropped, added borders and signed

Many thanks for stopping by.
Please feel free to offer feedback on any aspect of the photograph. Bev :-)

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A peiman: Taking a rest ... in autumn!Royaldevon 1 11-10 00:19
A rewshearer: Taking a rest ... in autumn!Royaldevon 1 11-08 13:14
Workshopjimkilgallon 2 11-08 13:11
A jimkilgallon: Taking a rest ... in autumn!Royaldevon 2 11-08 01:04
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Hi Bev :)

This is simply a great work with lovely autumn feeling keeping a diagonally placed BG!
The contrast is superb between the yellow leaf and the green bench. The sharpness and POV are perfect.
A very natural and effective work, my friend!

best regards,
Paras

this is not JUST A PHOTOGRAPH bEV IT IS A WORK OF ART GRT details colours and exellently composed and presented tfs
regards bryan

Hi Bev,
A nicely composed captured with this Autumn fallen leaf positioned on back of the bench!
Nice diagonal lines with droplets scattered on the wood and a nice golden leaf right in the proper position to coop with the rule of thirds.
Fabulous lighting and details.
Great work!
Regards,

Francis Xavier

Olá Bev,
Simple and sophisticated at same time. Love colors and excellent lightness.
Great entry for the Fiday's Theme, autumn at your hemisphere :o)
Have a good WE
Raimundo

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 123 N: 723] (4827)
  • [2009-11-06 1:56]

Woow, I love this one!! I've seen so many leafs this week, and I wanted to grab my camera, but I didn't...
This shot has beautiful colours, the green and the yellow! I can see them in the front and in the background!! Very good!
Much details here, great macro of this beautiful made yellow laef!

Well done, Beverly!!

Janneke

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 446 W: 103 N: 582] (2705)
  • [2009-11-06 2:15]

Hi Bev
Great colors and excellent clarity, the feel of freshness n colors makes this one stands out.

Nice focus and excellent sharpness!
the diagonal lines adds to the interest of this simple capture!
Nicely done!

TFS
Cheers
JZM

Nice colors and details.
Great composition.
Zoran

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4219 W: 414 N: 6621] (41961)
  • [2009-11-06 2:27]

Hi Beverley

The yellow leaf goes well, with the green of the park bench. I also like the repetitive diagonal lines, which add dynamism, & the repetition of the rainsdrops. Have a great weekend!

Hi Bev!
Beautiful artistic and romantic compo!
suberb contrasted colours,lighting and clarity!
the diagonal lines of the bench and the droplets
adds to the image! Nicely framed us usual!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Hello, Bev -
Great eye to see and capture the wonderful effect of this single leaf stuck wetly to the bench. Great choice to show the slats diagonally across the frame. The love the contrast of bright colors. Great autumn feel to the image. Well done!

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1465 W: 23 N: 0] (11700)
  • [2009-11-06 3:32]

Hi Beverley...
Beautiful shot with so nice details...
Beautiful colors contrast...
Have a nice weekend...
Regards...
Andro

Hi Bev:)
What an amazing picture vith great POV, colours,light and excellent graphism.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

I like everything about this Bev.
Contrasting colors are great.
Composition with diagonal bench slats is perfect.
The water droplets are a perfect addition.
Simple frame is good.
Great job.
have a great weekend
Trudy

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1396 W: 31 N: 3041] (12286)
  • [2009-11-06 6:40]

HI Bev
I like the fact that you centered the leave, it does give it the spotlight.
The wet bench a good prop for this leaf with the one drop of water looking like its shedding a tear.
Very nice shot
Dot

Hi Bev!
excellent shot! very nice colors with nice contrast...great sharpness, nice diagonal composition and lovely drops:)
tfs
best wishes
Alper

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1259 W: 0 N: 2462] (20214)
  • [2009-11-06 7:26]

Hello,

fantastique vue, de cette feuille, sur ce banc vert, une merveille, superbe iamge, avec le gouttes d'eau, une splendeur.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Aww this is GREAT Bev! I love the diagonal lines of the slats! That really adds interesting and a sort of framing to the shot! Nice and sharp! Nice posting for the theme!
B-)
Linda

Hello Beverly,

I like very much your capture, great contrast and colors, a plus are the waterdrops on the bench, but I would like much more that the leaf was a bit out of center.

Have a nice weekend,
Sorina

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  • efi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 211 W: 11 N: 183] (3302)
  • [2009-11-06 12:39]

hi bev;
a very sharp and sad shot of pastel colors.tfs.

Hi Berverly,
Nice presentation of this autumn maple leaf on a bench, great colors and light,
Excellent POV. and clear & sharp picture ,
very well taken and done.
Michel Have a nice WE.

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1474 W: 10 N: 738] (10751)
  • [2009-11-06 17:00]

Hi Bev,
Very elegant composition. I like the small water droplets on the leaf and on the bench. Beautiful colours that match. Great shot.
Sunil

This is a simple subject captured in an amazing light and thats what really made me notice this little treasure! The colour saturation, sharpness and DOF are exquisite with a great composition to top it off. Excellent work and TFS!

regards,

Dilshan

Hi Bev

Very sharp and very clean shot of this amazing subject
The color harmony is superb in addition to lovely image quality
The 3 metal pins locate magnificently across the leaf
Well done

TFS, Alireza

Hello Beverley,
This is an attractive autumn still life!
Super details in this yellow leaves, and the colours of the season are well reproduced.
The subject is well framed!
Best regards Siegfried

Hi Bev,

Good title for this photo . . Nicely composed and very well combination of yellow on green . . and blurred other leaves as BG . .
I like the composition

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 124 N: 1437] (20258)
  • [2009-11-07 10:44]

Hi Beverley,
great compo.Beautiful contrast between green and yellow.I liked diagonal presentation so much.TFS.Necla.

Hi Beverley,

Wow ! Great composition and colors. The DOF is very well mastered here. The central position of the leaf is great there since the diagonal lines of the bench add a dynamism which compensate for the central position of the subjet.

Kind Regards
Pascal-Eric

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3304 W: 787 N: 4423] (19892)
  • [2009-11-07 14:46]

Hi Bev,
Oh, this is a superb photo well composed. The oblique lines give dynamism at the image
Very good definition of the sharp and contrasted colors!
This is bright and vibrant. As much than Autumn can be!
Beautifully done! Annie

Beverley
Superbe photo qui est une véritable œuvre d'art. Belle composition et magnifique harmonie de tons.
Amicalement
JJ

Hi Bev
This is very good, I like the angle you have used especially the diagonals of the bench. The greens and yellows contrast well with perfect colours and saturation. You could make a cross process effect with this image and it would look very very cool and arty in my opinion.
Regards
Jim

Hello Beverley! Amazing macro, perfect sharpness, ideal contrast, nice light and colours. Good idea, very good shot. Fantastic effect. Well done!

This is just stunning! A truly postcard- or coffee-table-book- worthy image. The sharp detail of leaf and bench, the droplets of dew, the way the background mirrors and emphasises the colours of the foreground ... amazing.

The drop-shadow border is ok, although I'm not so keen on the signature, it marrs the image for me. I assume you add the signature with a text layer in PS, have you thought of reducing the signature's opacity to 30%? It makes it more subtle and preserves the integrity of the image.

Rew

Hello Beverley,

This is really good composition and shot.
I like the centrally placed on the leaf.
Great clarity, details, light and colors.

Best regards,
Tatjana

what a beautiful shot bev
i really enjoid and a add it to my favorits. i also love the diagonal lines of the bench and its contrasting hue, with the leaf and drops of rain and 3 pins around it!
tfs peiman

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 3 N: 531] (3604)
  • [2009-11-10 3:57]

Hello Bev,
this is a very artistic composition, simple yet effective. The strong diagonal lines and the leaf perfectly positioned give a graphic result.I like this a lot.
best regards,
Bev

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1004 W: 81 N: 66] (12130)
  • [2009-11-12 20:51]

dear Beverley,
this sad feeling of autumn is excellent,
lone fallen leaf in the cold rain,
vivid yellow leaf on dim green bench,
these situation is very poetic, and your shot shows us its depressed atmosphere well,
thank you,
Akihisa

hi beverley
great image,simple but so effective really represents autumn ,excellent contrast between the leaf and bench,lovely detail,great diagnal pov.
regards
jimmy

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