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Après la sieste


Après la sieste
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Copyright: MarieJose Hains (Marie-Jose) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 212 W: 2 N: 233] (1662)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2006-05-22
Catégories: Amis/Famille, Portrait
Appareil photographique: Canon EOS 30D, Canon 24-105/4L IS
Exposition: f/8, 1/4 secondes
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale
Date de soumission: 2006-05-22 20:42
Vue: 791
Favoris: 1 [voir]
Points: 20
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
Natacha was resting..and when we arrived she woke up...
Beautiful natural light from the window on her face. Couldn't resist...

The beauty of innocence, both inner and outer.

I have been taking portrait photography course in the last weeks... I love it. Let me know what you think if you have a moment. Many thanks! Marie-José

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A beautiful child, just waking from happy sleep. the light is perfect. I would not have been able to resist taking a photo also. Well seen, well captured, well presented.
Regards,
Lois

Very nice shot Marie. Good lighting, composition and mood. I like it very much...
Tomasz

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2107 W: 92 N: 1853] (10269)
  • [2006-05-23 6:28]

Salut Marie-José,
J'aime bien ce portrait avec l'expression si douce et calme de son visage. Un petit détail m'accroche par contre le focus n'est pas parfait sur les yeux. Autrement une très belle composition avec une excellent éclairage et de très belle couleurs.
Luc

Hi Marie-José,

What a delightful child. Excellent light, perfect just waking smile and a nice tight composition. Excellent skin tones and very natural. TFS,
David
PS Many thanks for your comment on Cobwebs III

A touching expression. Thanks.
serge

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  • Fisher Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 351 N: 944] (5728)
  • [2006-05-29 18:50]

Hi Marie,

Well done on the effort and composition.
Focus and slight composition issues. Not bad though. Keep practicing. ;) :)

Mike

Great portrait, the innocence of the child can be seen. Well done!

Hi Marie-Jose
You have a beautiful portrait of Natacha. A sparkle in her eyes. She obviously likes you to take her photo. Well done. TFS.
Mike

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2007-02-08 13:44]

Cute photo Marie Jose..well done on your composition, but as Mike said focus is not correct, so that makes it not look sharp, her hand and wrist area are sharper.

Hope you have gained lots of knowledge since you have been at your classes.

Keep up the good work
Cheers
Dawn.

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  • kbeall Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 531 W: 109 N: 902] (3576)
  • [2007-02-20 22:39]

Hello Marie-Jose,
A beautiful portrait, and perfect timing catching this child in the dreaminess between sleep and wakefulness. Nice colors and soft, effective lighting. A perfect crop for a unique POV!
All the best,
Karen

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