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First Fish


First Fish
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Copyright: Sam Ramadan (samr) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
Genre: Gens
Média: Couleur
Date de prise de vue: 2006-07-02
Catégories: Nourriture, Oeuvres d'art, Ambiance, Portrait
Appareil photographique: Panasonic Lumix DMC-LX1
Versions: version originale
Date de soumission: 2006-07-09 1:30
Vue: 659
Points: 34
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
My son & I went camping this last weekend and he caught his first fish (a river trout). I am experimenting with how to present this special occasion, and came up with this combination of 3 shots - the fishing, the catch and the camera that captured it all.
PP:
First layer, background = added brown gradient to give sepia effect. Some spot burning and dodging. Second Layer - the camera - desaturated - resized and laid on top. Third layer - cropped to fit in the camera view pane.
Flattened, framed and saved for web. Sharpened with Neat image.
I am interested in how others would have handled the occasion and look forward to your suggestions.
Thanks, Sam

cstathoulis, rosana, Loon, vsinopoulos, JohnTulip, pablominto, Dawn, maleentjeh, Refugee trouve(nt) cette note utile
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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2006-07-09 1:34]

Very creative and novel idea Sam...Your son looks so proud of his first catch... well done to him..

Lovely photo, so nicely presented, excellent PP work...

A photo to cherish.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Kind regards
Dawn.

Hello Sam,
Looks like a great first trout!
I like the way you present the event, very creative in my opinion!
Personally I'd like the big image also in colours, after all this is a happy occasion...
Well done!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • amm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 29 N: 86] (634)
  • [2006-07-09 2:49]

Bonjour Sam,
Excellente idée menée avec veaucoup de créativité et de soin. L'ensemble est très soigné : composition, jeux de lumière, reflets, cadrage des deux images, choix du cadre. Bravo! Un tout petit bémol, je trouve dommage que l'objectif de la caméra soit visible mais ce n'est que mon avis.
amm

Hello Sam
Razor sharp and colourfull creation of your magic box called:Camera about a camera! Do you know this movie
created by Robert Redford: A river runs trough it?!?
If not try to see it!Looking to this very nice photo you like the movie! Compliments from Holland and have a good Sunday..

John T

Hi Sam, I see your creativity is getting better and better! Excellent image, very good PP work and a novel approach to documenting memories. I don't think I would have done differently, I believe your work is great!
Vassilis

P.S. Great looking son too!

Hi Sam,
Super PP work, very creative.
TFS
Loon

This is a nice idea, good choice of colours.
And all put into a nice frame.

Hi Sam,
You really made a good report of the event and presented it very well. Your son deserves this fantastic shot and I am sure it will refresh this moment, for many years to come.
Very creative pp works.
Well done,
Salvu.

Marvellous work Sam. Very creative way of presenting this for your son. What a souvenier for him to have. I wouldn't change a thing. I think it's perfect just the way it is. Very well done.

Hi Sam,

What a creative composition!! Very clever way to present us two photos tohether!! Great montage you've done here!! The shadow of the camera looks so natural!!!
Very well done!!

Constantinos

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-07-09 20:26]

So good to see you posting again, Sam. Very nicely done montage to capture the pleasure & the memory of your fishing trip. I like the shadow of the camera you have added to the picture - very nice touch. I am not certain if it would have looked better if the background picture would have been in colour as well...really not certain about that. Nicely done and I hope you had a nice meal with the fish!

I love what you've done here, thanx, M, (*_*)

Hi Sam, so happy to see you back here ! Love the PP work you did, it is so creative and well done ! Magnificent !

Marleen

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  • rosana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 2 N: 248] (3319)
  • [2006-07-13 12:04]

Hello Sam what a fantastic idea this was, colors and compo is just perfect along with the PP work. Thanks for sharing it is a beautiful country that we have here.

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2006-07-19 12:42]

Hello,Sam! Very good pp work and so well composed! This is very creative and full of joy! Thanks for sharing ! Michel

good postcard type shot. very well thought out and executeed
jaco

Hi Sam,
I doubt if I would have come up with an idea like that. Exceptional PP work. Love the look of pure joy on your son's face. Nicely done and well presented. TFS,
David
Many thanks for your comment on
Cataract Gorge Reserve II

Hi Sam,
Awsome photo. I love how the actual photo is orange and the picture in the camera is colorful. Great idea. I like the frame too. TFS. Mandie

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