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Horseman view II


Horseman view II
Information sur la photo
Copyright: Mujahid Awais (Mujahid-Awais) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 901 W: 137 N: 599] (5553)
Genre: Gens
Média: Noir & blanc
Date de prise de vue: 2007-12-24
Catégories: Action
Appareil photographique: 20D, Canon 17-40 f/4 L
Exposition: f/9.0, 1/80 secondes
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Versions: version originale
Date de soumission: 2007-12-28 14:11
Vue: 1374
Favoris: 4 [voir]
Points: 87
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
Buzkashi is a game . I capture this image with two shots on same place and same light, Created at Photoshop CS3. My first upload here. I want to improve my skill with the help of you friends,
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A clic: I am obliged,Mujahid-Awais 1 06-07 10:30
A Fisher: Thanks.Mujahid-Awais 1 01-01 06:51
A Rickly: Thanks.Mujahid-Awais 1 01-01 06:44
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Critiques [Translate]

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  • bizsu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 0 N: 71] (717)
  • [2007-12-28 14:35]
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Hi Mujahid,
Congratulate, your very good first photo. Interests the second. Sharp picture, good focus.
Happy New Year !
Regards, Zsú

welcome mujahid
i m sure ,your photos will bring new taste in TL
pakistan's culture is one of the different culture in the world
you begin really good image and technic
congrats
''i hope everything will be ok in your country''
happy new year

Excellent composite Mujahid, and welcome to Trek Lens.

Quality composition and great use of black and white.

Peter

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2007-12-28 17:12]

Very nice capture, Mujahid, and freeze motion. Well composed even though I prefer the man on left is not cropped, good exposure. This is very good 1st post to show your talent. TFS

Well come Mujahid but why so late..here you have seen that many praise their equipment but I like to be at the TOP with maximum, tfs.

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  • iimanyus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 152 W: 59 N: 86] (1771)
  • [2007-12-28 20:29]

Hi Mujahid
Very creative and PP Work done well
Good Job

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 0 N: 273] (3168)
  • [2007-12-28 20:34]
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welcome, Mujahid. we are all learning here. nice pp work, unique composition. i would like to see the full body of that man at the left

Dear Mr. Mujahid,
Welcome to treklens. Very well done. Excellent post processing and very good B&W work.

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  • Ruut Gold Star Critiquer [C: 254 W: 8 N: 33] (1277)
  • [2007-12-29 0:45]
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Hello Mujahid,
Very beautiful picture. You cought the action very well. The composition is superb with the horseman on the left who is watching the scenery of the arriving horsemen. Tones are very okay.
Very well done!!!!
Ruut

Hi Mujahid,

Welcome to TL . .
This is a beautiful picture . . You have done a great shot and combined with excellent PP work . .
I thought was painting . .
Lovely artwork . .
I join TL early this year, and learnt a lot about photography from friends . .
Please be active searching picture and giving critique . . and by doing this, your picture will be commented too . .
I am sad to see and read what happen in your country . . Hope you are well and happy with family . .

Tfs,
TJutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on My Favorite Shot .

:-)) will be back this afternoon

very good photo.. phantastic

Merhaba Mujahid
Nice picture. Interesting scenery.
Compliments Thank you for sharing
bye Aga

Hi Mujahid,
Welcome in TL. Your first uploaded shot gave a good impression of your photographic skill. And it suites you more to have pure shots rather than alteration by softwares though this trend is very common to show better impression in todays digital imaging formats, which is not appreciated by the high pro level photographers. Those whose photographic calibre is small and limited, they depend on softwares to have a shortcut way for creating better composition and combinations.
Your photographic skill seems that it doesn't need any extra help by CS3. And for a photographer the most important thing is the right time, with right angle and right shot.
Hopefully your upcoming shots will give more pleasures to the TL community, and thanks for sharing,
Regards,
M.Y.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 0 N: 1709] (13741)
  • [2007-12-29 12:36]
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Unbelieveble ,stunning job here Muja!!!
jan

Hello Mujahid,
Wonderful debute on TrekLens! This picture looks like a movie sequence: it is dynamic (I can almost here the sound of the horses) and very crisp (subtle play of shadows and light - I particularly like the cloud of dust behind the horses).
Good choice for a sepia colour treatment as well.
I just would have liked the man on the foreground to be a little bit more visible (not entirely, but seeing just some more of his dark silhouette would still have enhanced the depth of field and the "drama" of your picture). Only a detail though...
Congratulations and keep on sharing your photos with us!
Kind regards,
Erik

Hi Mujahid;
Welcome to Treklens and waht an impressive first post you have done here.The action is great the light is very interesting and dramatic and the comp and POV is super........ looking forward to more postings ..... thanks my friens... I'll be back tomorrow with :)....Roman:0)

Hi dear friend,
welcome on TL!
Great first posting! Wonderful compo with great details and light.
The cropp it's excellent and the frame it's very good.
Seems you are a very good photographer ;)
Best wishes,
Ioana
:) soon

Mujahid

simplemente bello gran trabajo

Like a scene from a movie Realy a superbe shot Like it very much Mujahid.

Beste wishes for 2008.

Grtz Pim

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 2 N: 202] (15668)
  • [2007-12-31 6:25]

very nice and perfect picture!

One of the best Photos I have seen on TL.
Reminds me of Ghengis Khan.
Looking forward to your future work.
Regards.
MikeD

Wow! Good action and tones are impressive!I like the result with that cool result! Compo is strong! I enjoy that angle a lot!
Welcome on TL!

This is a very dramatic shot, almost like a painting. Good choice of B & W. Wonderful composition and light.

Excellent work, nice tones, excellent perspective from foreground to background.

Happy New Year

Cheers

hi mujahid,

fantastic shot. please post more.

regards frans

This is a very nice work. Congratulations...
~HAKAN~

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1175] (7431)
  • [2008-01-01 17:09]

Welcome to TL, Mujahid:) This is a marvelous post, and has a rich visual quality that almost seems three-dimensional. Well done...and keep posting!

Hi Mujahid, fascinating composition with wonderful horses and superb light, nice sepia tonality, a great firs photo, very well done, welcome on TL and have a great 2008, ciao Silvio

Good work again Mujahid. I think it might be improved if the figure on the left were reduced a in size and moved right - into the main image a little more. We need to see just a little more of that figure.
Otherwise - an excellent combination of 2 excellent images.

mujahid..you really have something here..3 shots and i love them all
this is so graphic with the fellow at the edge looking into the shot but the lighting brings the real flavour of the shot into being and creates as work of art
cheers
geof

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1592 W: 131 N: 2256] (20565)
  • [2008-01-03 19:41]

Hello Mujahid, another wonderful shot from you, great composition and perfect technique. Thanks !

Mario

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  • RICOXT Silver Star Critiquer [C: 35 W: 0 N: 4] (2077)
  • [2008-01-04 17:34]

very nice picture!*****

Hello Mujahid

A wonderful composition,the scene is alive.You have captured the mood and atmosphere.
Excellent focus and sharpness of detail.
The cloudy sky and the dust of the horses combine to really make this shot dramatic.
Wonderful lighting and contrast.
The sepia tone definitely gives this a timeless look.
TFS

Rob

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1644 W: 118 N: 2834] (11418)
  • [2008-01-10 11:04]

Just perfect (and direct to my favorits).
Congrats, and my regards, mb

This is a beautiful picture, love the art effect Welldone
Regards
Frik

it's a painting-like (though BW) photo, very nice effect you achieved; nothing to criticize... congratulations and TFS - Tomasz

Bravo!

I like the "surrealistic" athmosphere!

Best regards!

Michael

Helo Mujahid!
All your gallery is beautiful!!!
Nice sepia composition and fantastic atmosphere!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • zen79 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 4 N: 8] (384)
  • [2008-02-21 2:18]

Unbelieble! an amazing picture, maked with solid knowledgement of photography. I like so much the composition (foreground and background), the brown tone, your use of light, the sky,... Thank you for share.

I feel the story. How to improve? I think its already excellent.


Thanks.

Hi Mujahid..this is really fantastic...I can't help you get better...you already know much more than I...great light, tones and details.

Roger

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5766 W: 198 N: 2587] (10150)
  • [2008-03-07 4:03]

Hello Mujahid

Fortunate you for having these beautiful shows.
Wonderful scenery, until it seems scene of a film!
Quality composition and great uses of black and white.
Congratulations my friend...

Sérgio

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  • Kli Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 191 W: 17 N: 198] (2000)
  • [2008-03-12 5:46]

Bonjour Mujahid,
Vos photos sont magnifiques ! On ne sait lesquelles choisir ! Félicitations !
Bonne journée.

Kli

This is VERY well done... great use of PS to enhance and give feeling and meaning to a scene.... interesting tone here. :)

Beautiful composition. The horseman in the left added a semi frame besides being a basic part of the capture. It is the best of the three in my view. Thanks for sharing.

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4714)
  • [2008-06-07 6:44]
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You are too modest, Mujahid!
This is a masterpiece of an insertion, judiciously-composed to provide a great impression of depth.
Side light shows much relief and the mid-tones a well balanced for visible details in shaded areas.
I have the impression of attending to a 3D movie show to the point I forget the absence of color!
Best regards.
Robert

Just change the hats on these men and you would have a picture that looks JUST LIKE Texas! yeeehaaww!! giddyup cowboy!!
Very nice work here Mujahid! Your pp work is amazing, excellent details, love how you just make such an impact with the viewer!
B-)
Linda

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 958 W: 20 N: 1285] (7296)
  • [2008-09-22 18:03]

Have to tell you that you have an absolutely incredible gallery. Each picture truly amazing and artistic. Love the sepiated tone here and the pov outstanding. WOW!!! TFS
Christan

Hello Mujahid,
I just found this shot in your gallery and what a first post it was too! The composition and details are excellent. There is so much depth it is in 3_D.
My compliments!
TFS, Joni

Salam Müjahid bhaijaan,
A wonderful capture vith sharpness and lighting are perfect.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

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