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Lady Cigarette n’Lil Doggie


Lady Cigarette n’Lil Doggie
Information sur la photo
Copyright: Pablo Minto (pablominto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5735 W: 536 N: 5987] (27446)
Genre: Gens
Média: Noir & blanc
Date de prise de vue: 2008-07-26
Catégories: Vie quotidienne, Humour, Transports
Appareil photographique: Nikon D50, 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6GII DX Zoom Nikkor
Versions: version originale
Thème(s): Pablo in Black & White, 150 points or more - Second Chapter [view contributor(s)]
Date de soumission: 2008-07-29 10:03
Vue: 1544
Points: 156
[Ligne directrice - Note] Note du photographe
Driving over long distances can be hard, in particular when outdoor temperature passes above 30C and the aircon is dubious…

Dogs and other furry creatures are suffering inside cars and they get so happy for an opportunity to have some fresh air!

The situation was captured on a rest stop west of Røros last weekend, and judged by the license plates of the car this couple is Dutch.


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Black and white conversion/PP work:

Converting to B&W in channel mixer, monochrome (30%, 59%, 11%)
Adding grain (2, 2, 2)
Curves (weak S-shape)
Oversharpening USM (150%)
NeatImage (30, 30)

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  • Great 
  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 814 W: 51 N: 1717] (11169)
  • [2008-07-29 10:26]

ciao pablo..bellissimo lavoro in bianco e nero...ottimo pov...complimenti per il soggetto..ottimi i dettagli...
grande composizione...
lele

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 957 W: 20 N: 1282] (7282)
  • [2008-07-29 10:26]

good interesting pov, and like the b/w effect. Great details and nice moment captured. TFS
Christan

Hello Pablo,
I like to see your b&w photos including this one. Indeed summer travel by car can be tedious, one needs to take a break. I like how you composed this, the dog to me is a highlight. There is good depth, tone, and contrast. My best regards and hoping you enjoy the remainder of summer.
Danilo

Hello Pablo,
nice B&W and composition!Bravo!
Great work.
Regards.
A.

Hello Pablo
Original and funny capture.Wonderful B&W presentation.
Thanks
Friendly greetings
J.Diogo

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15592)
  • [2008-07-29 11:15]

transleted text ?

In Belgium one can smoke also not within. The dog has seen the photographer!

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3304 W: 787 N: 4423] (19892)
  • [2008-07-29 11:46]

Hi Pablo,
Interesting subject and very good composition! The feeling of relaxation is so credible here!
This B&W is well appropriated for this.
I wonder why you used oversharpening whereas you added some grain? This is just a question because I think that the effect is just a bit strong...just an idea!!
Bravo! Annie

Hi dear Pablo ,
Nice B/W shot.
Great composition and good contrast.

Kind regards
Saeed

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2008-07-29 21:18]

Very nicely converted to b&w, I like the lighting and contrast. A very typical scene here as well. And hey! I love the dog!! TFS and have a happy day!

  • Great 
  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2234 W: 172 N: 0] (28782)
  • [2008-07-29 23:25]

Hi Pablo dear friend ;)
nice composition and mood...
Best,
J ;)

ciao Pablo..
returnig to your land.. i have already the taste of some atmosfere i lived there!!
the composition works so well.. and the b&w is always perfect for a cigarette!! well done!
ciao Marco

Hello Pablo,
How are you my friend?
This one very much interesting..Beautiful image..
Nice converting to B&W..I like the idea..
Nice touch my friend.

CM

Hello Pablo! Wonderful scene. Good POV and composition. The cigarettes are sublime! Well done!

  • Great 
  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2638 W: 1 N: 1262] (15433)
  • [2008-07-30 2:27]

Hola amigo
as in the movies, a woman a cigarette and a glass,
the dog, an extra:))
beautiful picture and nostalgic air,
I like your work friend,
Regards

merhaba dear pablo
excellent black white picture and good idea.wonderful composition.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

  • Great 
  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2008-07-30 6:12]

Hi Pablo
Thats live. Goos comp.
Gr Jos
P**

very nice shot, like a clip from a movie, very nice compo

cris(",)

helo Pablo,

the woman have a faraway look in her as for the dog he/she just happy to be out.. nice one in black and white.. yes this how every stop scene look like.. tfs..

regards, terry

  • Great 
  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2718 W: 405 N: 2972] (32683)
  • [2008-07-30 8:50]

selam Poblo...
enteresting comp...and shot...selamlar

  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5682 W: 197 N: 2420] (9563)
  • [2008-07-30 10:12]

Hello Pablo

He was on vacation!
you walked a little distant of TL.
But I am sure that was your enjoy summer!
Great details and nice moment captured.
a good use of the b/w.
your taste is very good.
Great compo my friend...
Congratulations!

Sérgio

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1170] (7407)
  • [2008-07-30 19:28]

Good journalistic shot, with many possible stories:) The grain and oversharpening add an interesting edge to the mood. Perhaps she should give up smoking? Nice work!

You obviously have other B&w's in your gallery Pablo but I can't recall seeing one before. A well composed imaged to start with and your conversion techniques admirable. The use of USM at such a high percentage has added a little 'zing',
David

very documentary photo, i like it and your cois to bw ist perfekt!!

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4762] (21679)
  • [2008-07-31 4:47]

Hi Pablo...
I like the B&W image, and quality...
Well creative and composed.
Well done!
Rgd. George

Ciao Pablo, splendid B&W composition with lovely dog and smoking woman, fun capture, very well done, ciao Silvio

  • Great 
  • fkokol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 0 N: 146] (1482)
  • [2008-07-31 14:11]

great moment you captured. very well composed. I like your BW choice.
greetings,

figen

Hi Pablo.
Very beautiful idea.Great B&W photo.
Excellent composition and details.
Well done.TFS.
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

hi Pablo,very good b&w photo..very interesting story;)Good catch :))

warm regards
biljana

Bonjour,
Jolie scène de la vie quotidienne.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

Oh, oh that Dutch couple then really needed a break - imagine that - tropical temperatures in Norway - years ago we also had a heatwave when visiting Oslo, had to jump in the fountain of the Vigeland park to cool down with the children.
Lovely moment Pablo, although I think you oversharpened the picture.

TFS
Els

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1626 W: 118 N: 2805] (11304)
  • [2008-08-01 2:42]

Hello Pablo,
Excelent POV and compo; wonderful b/w work and a very graphic moment.
Congrats, mb

Hi Pablo,
So you added noise on this one ... it actually works well ... I can't pinpoint what it is but the image looks great. The effect is like an old photo using a high ISO film. Well composed ... excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Bonjour Pablo,
Very nice composition and details, good contrast in B & W. I like the fence and the pose of the lady and dog, Excellent done.
compliments
Michel

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2008-08-01 12:59]

Hi Pablo

Great candid, it is a completely unguarded moment and could be in any country. The B&W suits the image.

TFS

Karan

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2008-08-02 0:33]

Hi Pablo
That's what's nice about the way you conceive reality. The unimportant can become serious when combined with a note like that.
Compliments
Argiris

Hi Pablo,
Great expression of BW.
Good using of rule of thirds.
A masterpiece again.
TFS
Selahattin E

Well composed and toned my friend Pablo.
Dennis

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1148 W: 2 N: 838] (10423)
  • [2008-08-02 8:17]

I liked that B&W much, Pablo.
A very "european way of life" ! I know it, I´ve already lived in Germany! :-)
Brazilian Greetings,
Nivaldo

Hello Pablo,

A B&W after a very long time? I like the composition and I can understand the discomfort. I am sure that lady is relaxing and enjoying. A different POV and composition. TFS.

Kiran.

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1920] (10151)
  • [2008-08-02 13:09]

Hallo Pablo,
Ausgezeichnete scharfe Details und gute Beobachtung. Sehr gute Komposition und ein sehr interessantes Bild mit der interessante Schwarz-Weiß Farbe.
Liebe Grüße.
Eva

Excellent scene, full of expressiveness, so funny and well captured ! The meditative lady, the curious four-legged partner. Well framed and I like the b&w approach-suitable for a daily-life scene.

TFS,
Andreea

  • Great 
  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2016 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2008-08-03 1:29]

hi Pablo

Nice B&W shot of the woman having a drink and smoke at rest stop. It is very interesting to meet people when on travel and you are observant to study the car plate number, especially now able to drive around in Europe freely.

Early this year, before we trekked the national park jungle in Sabah, we met a Swedish couple who came in and out without hours. We met them few days earlier at Mt Kinabalu summit too. Very adventurous visitors, but that was why they came to Borneo for the natural trails. tfs

bill

  • Great 
  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2008-08-03 5:30]

Hello Pablo,
Your ideas please me much. The organization is outstanding here, perfect details and a wonderful effect of the picture.
Thanks and beautiful greetings.
Janusz

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4065)
  • [2008-08-03 6:22]
  • [+]

hello Pablo
nice shot with good composition.
did you realy had 30C????
thanks for your nice comment on
"the green line".
best regards
David

Love the extreme contrasts here Pablo, almost High-key, not quite. It the scene of everyday life that makes this shot really nice. The dogs attention almost says, "Let's GO, I don't have time to sit!" Really nice work Pablo!
B-)
Linda

i can see a very well composed monochrome here Pablo, crisp and rich in contrast, as a blck and white image should be.TFS.
regards..................andres

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4714)
  • [2008-08-03 12:50]

Hello Pablo
Is your disappearance from your home page a sad omen?!
This is a classic view, my friend: People enjoying cigarettes near an area for dogs!
Seen from that angle, she seems quite jealous of her pleasure and it appears that she doesn't want to miss a single puff!
The beast looks ennobled of a royal collar due to the desarturation process.
This unusual theme in your portfolio excels by the view of fence that meets the diagonal disposition of table and cement border.
Please reappear!
Robert

  • Great 
  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1396 W: 31 N: 3041] (12286)
  • [2008-08-04 5:31]

HI Pablo
A breath of fresh air for the dog whose owner smokes.
Wonder which one coughs the most.
Good composition that works well with B &W
Dot
Later

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 363 W: 46 N: 513] (1951)
  • [2008-08-04 14:37]

Interesting "moment in time" capture. As a former smoker, I do recall those moments well.
The black and white treatment, the position of the woman and the stance of the dog all make for a wonderful image--as does the styrofoam cup and straw sitting and waiting.
Good composition on this shot, very well done.
TFS,
Wilt

Hi Pablo!

Interesting image! I like b&w and your click is great!

Congratulations to your beautifull album!

Regards.

Professional work my dear friend,
great composition, my compliment!!!
TFS

Regards!

Have a nice day Pablo!

hello PAblo
how are you doing? hope things are fine at your end!
you have converted a normal daily life shot in to an artistic one. i like the eye contact of the dog with your lens.
wonderful POV and the black and white conversion adds philosphy to the shot.
fine composition
regards
Manuj MEhta

I live in a land of hot summers...... and I never had air conditioning that worked...... sigh... Yes, summer can be hell!

Hi Pablo !!

great POV!
nice live's scene..

good b&w choice!

TFS

kisses from Italy
Ania

nice B&W and composition.

Prywitanne Pablo!
funny compo!good b/w photo!nice...=)
ALiaksandr

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  • budgun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 2 N: 382] (2091)
  • [2008-08-06 20:14]

Hi Pablo,
How true, I have been in the company of many dogs onver the years and when it snows they gleefully roll in it.
The first crisp cool day in the fall they act like they had a hit on the coffee and cigrattes.
Regards, Tom

  • Great 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 123 N: 2164] (19737)
  • [2008-08-09 5:55]

Well seen and done Pablo, good use of B&W. Thanks!

Mario

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  • fff Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 608 W: 0 N: 40] (2702)
  • [2008-08-09 7:01]

Hi Pablo the summertime is great period in Norway i assume you appeared it in black and white cos the fall is knocking on the door tfs Shimon

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4219 W: 414 N: 6621] (41961)
  • [2008-08-10 1:38]

Hi Pablo

A superb b&w image, with the lady adding a welcome human element. Good sharpness & tonal range. Tfs!

Hello Pablo,

Very fun shot, Dear friend!

Malik & Mary.

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 27 N: 37] (207)
  • [2008-08-13 18:30]

Hi Pablo
I can see here all the gray scale in this composition, that's very good because B&W is more difficult than colour.
Well done for the frame scene quality.
Cheers.

Hi, Pablo!

Excellent life piece, good composition and nice mood. I like it!
(Tiny one too sharpened according to me.)

jazmin

Hi Pablo: poor doggie, sweltering in the heat, and then: second hand smoke!
Well composed b/w shot (horizontals, verticals and diagonals intersect accd to golden rule). I do question however if the sharpening was necessary. I'd prefered it a bit softer.....
Cheers
Otto

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  • juanjo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 53 N: 58] (3365)
  • [2008-08-18 14:33]

hello Pablo


you have made a nice picture from this simple situation
BW suits perfectly

best regards


Juan

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  • izler Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 516 W: 69 N: 17] (106)
  • [2008-08-19 13:54]

hello pablo
beautiful composition and good capture
i like POV and pp working
TFS
regards
izler

Excellent portrait photography/

  • Great 
  • oanna Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 134 W: 14 N: 44] (939)
  • [2008-08-21 6:09]

remarkable this grainy old-scool aspect.

regards

Reall Dutch indeed, haha
I recognize the dog, as my sister in law has one, but she looks prettier and dont smoke.!
Nice looking snapshot, Pablo.
Groeten van Jan

Helo Pablo
That is her 5 min. and i,m no smoker but i understud smokers
Nice shot
TFs
Cheers,Braca

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2008-08-24 3:08]

Incredible image. What can I say ... I am stunned.
Salil

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2008-08-24 3:40]

Hi Pablo,
Nice point of view of this beautiful composition in black & white. You have capture the moment and the situation :) Well done. Have a nice day
Diane

Hi Pablo,

The woman looks hot and weary. Yet the dog, with it's "fur coat" looks active and ready to play. Perhaps it's because he doesn't smoke!! :)

Very nice shot of the two enjoying their break. The black and white works very well here. I do wish she had a bowl of water for the pup!

from a dog afficianado in the U.S., Lisa

Hello Pablo. I like the effect created in this bw conversion. The subjects are well positioned in the frame with the fencing adds perspective. Sharp detail and very good presentation suited for Pablo's theme. Regards. Jusni

Wow!

An excellent shot for TL, Pablo - very educational and a great example of the benefits that can be reaped from writing 80 critiques per image posted. This is exactly what newcomers desperate for points need to see.

Hi Pablo,

It is very interesting to see what some creative PP work can do to an ordinary everyday scene! Both the B&W conversion as well as the added grain, give your photo that something special.
TFS,
Vassilis

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  • dip Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 0] (205)
  • [2008-09-02 2:36]

Hi Pablo,
beautiful B&W shot,nice contrast and excellent framing,
greetings,
Dimitris.

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 592 W: 0 N: 957] (4596)
  • [2008-10-07 18:30]

Hello Pablo,
a story telling shot.
Nice taken shot with good tones.
Most of all the subject is quite interesting.

regards,
Foozi

Dramatic shot Pablo. I love the dog with his/her handler. I like your boarder too.

Good Job!

Regards,
Joms

Pablo,
Nice composition taking advantage of lady`s placement at the corner.
As a suggestion, I would have cropped a little of the bottom ground to force the eyes over the lady and dog, even more.

Have a great Sunday,

Wellington

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